Just messing around

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  1. Sheen Machine

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    just tryin some new stuff in GIMP. came out with this as a result

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    also my SOTW entry
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    CnC ples ^^
     
    #1 Sheen Machine, Jun 29, 2009
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  2. Laxer

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    For the joker one, I would try and make the background smudged all in one direction, instead of the random blots of colors. Concentrate on flow. Also the little black line around the render is a little distracting.

    For the sotw, the focal is a little blurry, sharpen it up a little. Also the text on both is a little boring. You should download some new ones.
     
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    On the Optimus Prime sig, I suggest taking the Noise>Pick overlay and setting either Blur>Gaussian Blur on it, with low settings, or putting a very low Gaussian Blur filter.

    Looks a bit too sharp, and the transformer itself looks a bit woozy around the edges. Maybe find a better render/stock, or sharpen that up.
    Good, but it needs some flow. Also, use Selective Gaussian Blur on the first one on a layer or two, it looks too Noise>Picked. But yeah, you've got a fine base to improve upon.
     
  5. Duckyz

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    your joker sig needs to be cut better
    theres still a dodgy black line around the edges

    your SOTW just seems badly blured
    the rest of it is good
     
  6. Sheen Machine

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    damn you're right, i didn't notice the line around it.. oh well, i'll try and fix it i guess
    and i'm gonna work on my SOTW entry, thanks for all the Cnc
     

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