The Z color is a bit out of place, but other than that I find the text quite alright. The smudged part seems like you smudged it with a Hard Edge and too big of a brush. I suggest toning down your brush size and definitely turning off Hard Edge if it's on. Although it should look okay, you really need to blend more of the background into the render/screen. I'm assuming this is GIMP. +Potentially cool -Poorly Executed ?:With revision it has potential
The text is better, but the blending/smudging remains mediocre. Very limited flow, as well. I suggest using a C4D, and some color changes.
Smudging isn't too good and the bits of red are a bit out of place. Could do with a bit more range of colour tones in there too. But the placement is good and so is the text Also, this is a hazmat suit