Sandbox Sandtox narroz

Discussion in 'Halo 3 Competitive Maps' started by Spartan45kill, Jun 22, 2009.

  1. Spartan45kill

    Spartan45kill Ancient
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    I post you a remake of a map create by Dstroy92000, which I have just finished: Sandtox narroz.​

    Description : Symmetric map situated in the skybubble of Sandox, it is conceived to be played in Team Slayer or in CTF. There is a lot of action because of a very opened gameplay and a labyrinthine aspect.​

    A one side there is a man cannon as on Narrows. At the other side there is a wide open-air passage.​



    Weapons :​

    - 2 Snipers (150 sec)
    - 1 Rocket Launcher, 2 munitions (180 sec)
    - 2 Plasma pistols (20 sec)
    - Many Brs (10 sec)​

    Equipment :​

    - 1 bubbleshield (60 sec)
    - 1 drain (60sec)
    - 2 armor (60 sec)​

    Here the pictures :
    Blue base :
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    Red base :
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    Man cannon :
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    Middle of the map :
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    Otherside + bubbleshield :
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    Download link : Bungie.net : Halo 3 File Details
    I hope that you like my map !
    Please rate and comment !​
     
  2. Cookie Monster

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    Ok to start off, its a cool idea.
    Brining narrows to sandbox. Sweet.
    But:
    Not trying to rant, but I want to help you improve if you make a V2 so;
    Try putting structures, such as obliesk closer to the walk way, or go even further and interlock them.
    Interlock your flooring, (sorry if you did and I didnt see)
    Cram more stuff closer together instead of making it looking to spacey.
    More wider walkways, or atleast a few more if you have the items, no one likes going down tunnels, or one walkway to get into the other teams base.
    Unless its a 2v2, or 3v3.
    Anyhow good job on the map again, hope to see a V2.
     
  3. Spartan45kill

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    Thanks for your feedback !
    I say it in my first post it's a remake but I want to show you the original map. Here the link : [Sandbox] Sandtox
    I hope you'll see the difference between the two versions !
    I keep the tunnel because it was the original idea but I can understand that you don't like it.
    The floors is interlocking but some walls move after I save my map.
    Why? I don't know... Can you help me?
    Thank again for your criticism.
     
  4. Runic Aries

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    how reliable are the mancannons because they dont look very good to me, it seems like you can just angle your approach to the mancannon and wind up dead or in the top mid.
     
  5. Spartan45kill

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    If you directly jump into the mancannon you'll probably die but if you take it quietly, you're sure to have no problem. Well, I hope so...
     
  6. Cookie Monster

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    It's no problem, like I tell others I dont try to rant just trying to help.
    An to fix that flooring problem, do you use helpers; an object that acts as a ruler.
    Usally that stops the problem, if you need a more indepth explination just pm me, or add me on xbl and I'll show you later on.
     
  7. Spartan45kill

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    I understand that you just want to help me and I thank you for it!
    I see what you want to say so I'll try to use it.
    Thank again.
     

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