Sandbox Tight Spaces

Discussion in 'Halo 3 Competitive Maps' started by residntevl, Jun 20, 2009.

  1. residntevl

    residntevl Ancient
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    This is my first map post.

    This is my first Slayer map that I have made on Sandbox. It is made similar to another map of mine that I made but I like this version more. The link to it is here.

    Tight spaces is a small map that is good for about 4-6 people in a regular slayer game. It is a lot similar to my foundry map, Close Quarters, but this map features only one shotgun.


    Screenshots

    This is one side of the map.
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    This is the other side.
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    This is the top view of the map.
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  2. Crippled Hobo

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    The map looks really good for a first attempt, the middle section looks like a good main point of battle. To improve this map then you could perhaps put more cover in? Good layout overall but some improvements could be made.
     
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  3. residntevl

    residntevl Ancient
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    The link works for me. Odd... Thanks for the suggestions, I believe I could make it look better.
     
  4. ANTI YOU

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    the map looks alright for a first post but you should look up forging 101 because (correct me if im wrong) i don't see interlocking. it does not matter much with the block/talls because they automatically kind of interlock but the block/huges are not the same and even with your pics that are kind of far away, i can see gaps.

    i see new forgers with good ideas but lack some of the building skills, so read up and practice and you'll make some good ones.

    3/5
     
  5. Cookie Monster

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    Like the above person said.
    It looks ok, some interlocking and more asthetics would make this a great map.

    I would add a weapon list though; and the gametypes it supports.
    I know it does support slayer.

    A V2 would be nice, more lights, more weapons, and more asthetics.

    3/5.
     
  6. physcopirahna6

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    Looks pretty cool In my opinion i would say some bit are a bit empty the middles just right
    Good first map
     
  7. Elitespartan663

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    actually the link does work
     
  8. FORGING2PERFEKTION

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    i think your map looks ok overall like a other member said you should learn or do interlocking your map will look so much more cleaner with interlocking and geo-merging.
    i also think that the middle is a little bit open you could add for example a walls or a corner or something else.
    i think you can fix all that with a version two
     
  9. SK Aleks

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    Yeah you do need to do more interlocking, it really helps making it look nice and smooth. if you want I can help you make it better GT SK Aleks.
     

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