Mark v

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  1. Donii

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  2. alienman911

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    to blurry for my taste and i think it should be wider
     
  3. natu

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    YeaH!!! You made a sig. I haven't seen one in a while. I actually really like the blurring and smudging. Could you maybe un blurr the top of his head, it's really bothering me.
     
  4. Berkgina

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    the bluring is nice but you need more focal on the head of the spartan
     
  5. KratosAurion777

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    Way too much blurring all around. You can't really tell the focal from the rest of the sig because everything is too blurry. I would suggest sharpening the helmet and lightly sharpening the rest of the body, and leave the gun blurry. That would create a cool depth effect.
    The text is a bit on the bland side, you should try to make it more distinct and move it in closer to focal.
     
  6. EGP

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    Try working with different dimensions next time you make a sig, I hate the sizes you worked with on this sig. Anyway, I think you really need to work on your depth, the text is ok, I would have moved it a bit closer, it took me a while to relize there was text in the first place.
     

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