I think I'm getting better at lighting and I like how the sig turned out. Constructive criticism is wanted. Is there anything to improve on? V.1. With Bar V.2. Bar Removed
You placed a C4D but put it in the wrong spot. Place it in the bg and preferably one/two direction/directions to create flow. Don't pick ones that go crazy unless you really put them to good use. Try to sharpen the bg a little bit.
Sorry but I didn't use a C4D. Its just the effect that showed up when I tried feather lighting. Anyways thanks for the comments and give me ideas on what to improve.