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  1. Zerosun

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    i liked how this turned out. What do u guys think?
     
    #1 Zerosun, Jun 7, 2009
  2. M.Jelleh

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    That looks really sweet. The only thing I can say is erase that c4d or pattern that is covering the person's arm.
     
    #2 M.Jelleh, Jun 7, 2009
  3. Frag Man

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    Lightning has a focal disability. And colors are wacky. I guess I'm just not used to that.
     
    #3 Frag Man, Jun 7, 2009
  4. RaBBiiTTT

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    The monster in the left kinda disrupts the focal.
    And I don't see much flow.

    Lighting is great.
     
    #4 RaBBiiTTT, Jun 7, 2009
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  5. FlameRazor

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    WTF is that?!
     
    #5 FlameRazor, Jun 8, 2009
  6. KratosAurion777

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    I can't really tell what the focal is, everything is equally blurry. I think the person should stand out a bit more, and you should erase some of the C4Ds on the right side of the sig. The border is nice, and I don't mind the colors at all. Nice work.
     
    #6 KratosAurion777, Jun 8, 2009
  7. Zerosun

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    ill make it more clear with a v2 later. Heres the stock

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    #7 Zerosun, Jun 8, 2009
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