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  1. aMoeba

    aMoeba Ancient
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    just a quickie :D

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    Criticism greatly appreciated. Stock will come later, can't find it atm.

    And yes, the text placement is ughh

    stock:

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  2. Jimbodawg

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    Very nice! The only thing *ughh* about it is the text placement. =)
    However, the border looks weird for the signature itself. The colors don't fit in together very well.
    Maybe a full border or no border at all? =)
     
  3. RaBBiiTTT

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    Your sig is quite good.

    Although, the bg is a little too monotone for me.
    The render is blurred, sharpen it a bit.

    Text placement is way off.
    Change the font.

    Why is it that the border is uneven in size?
     
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  4. Berkgina

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    yea i fell the main problem in this is is that the main focal isnt sharpened and the focal isnt clear, text has to be moved then i will decide if it looks good or not
     
  5. aMoeba

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    Its not that the focal isn't clear, I just wanted to see what I could do with a LQ stock, which I used for the focal... I didn't do a full border because the width of the signature is already smaller then what I normally do.

    Yes, I KNOW the text placement is bad, but I'd love to hear suggestions as to where I can put it, because everything i've tried looks bad. OP updated with stock, so you know what I mean in the first few sentences.
     

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