This one, or This one?

I think there is too much text on the second one, it seems to pull me away from the focal,
and i like the flow of the first one better.

 

Um...first one, I like B&W sigs tho' and I'm very partial to them. But I say the first one because the effects look better to me and its b+w...

 

I like the second one.

The lighting is simply amazing.
No more and no less.

Although, you could have erased some parts of your C4D that was over the focal.

EDIT: Actually, I would pick the first one if it had the same colors like the second sig.
The effects are better on the first.

 

I agree, first one definitely.

 

I'll take the "or this one."

 

First one. I like the B&W and the text is better than the second one.

 

I like the first one, I think the black & white really conveys the guy's emotion.

That said, I like the second one too, just prefer the first.

 

Second one...