Well i tried out some new c4ds, a widescreen border, a different style of text, and a new smudge brush. CnC plez.
I think it's great. Although he seems a little to over blurred. C4D's are nice, Although I would of chose a better direction for them to come out of him.
Crop!!! Also the text color doesn't fit... I'd suggest a lightish blue (But visable w/o need of eye strain to read) and crop out some of his feet/lower body and move the text over a lot so you can crop the left. Maybe just "DC" and then like the AC symbol under it (The syncronize symbol). Kk... Good to see reasonable C4d use. Keep it up.
Very good work! I really like this sig. The C4D's look really good, though you could possibly rotate them a bit or something because they don't quite go with the render... I don't think it needs to be cropped at all, its nice just the way it is. Your smudging on the background is fantastic, and the lighting is very nice. Overall, well done!
I like the coloring and how well you blended the focal with the bg. The background is really bland and I recommend adding more effects to it. You did a lot better with the text, but the slanting thing just doesn't fit the sig and you could have placed it a little closer to the render/stock. Nice improvement.
Thanks. At first i put the text flowing with a C4D, but that didnt work since the other side was bland. Its not a very good sig stock, but i still like it.