kar

Hmmm... I actually really like this. The only problem I see is that the focal seems to not follow the rule of thirds at all. I would suggest cropping off a bit of the bottom and about 3/4 of an inch on the righ. Other than that the effects are pretty good and the blending works.

7.5/10

 

The focal is always supposed to be on a 1/3 line. Such as a tic tac toe board... Or in this pic:

You would want the focal on one of the lines. Preferably at an intersection.

 

What if the render is long?

would you make a longer canvas?

 

cut off part of the render, flow should always go over focal, but just barely.

also, here's a link to rule of thirds, although this is represented on a photograph, you should place your focal using the exact same method.

http://www.photoshopessentials.com/photo-editing/rule-of-thirds.php

 

That's a dumb rule.

 

It's used primarily in photography but it applies to all art forms.

 

Not on all occasions.

 

Maybe not, but it's definitely a guideline for many types of art.

I really like this, I like the soft lighting behind and under the car. Good job!