Just a trailer and some testing to get me better at sony vegas, cheesy death sounds on the noscopes are on purpose http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=nkbA667SqTs&feature=channel_page
Montage trailers are supposed to be 'over-edited'. It's supposed to be difficult to see clips. Well, not all trailers are like that, but with the style he's going for, it should. One thing I would recommend that looks great in trailers and the actual montage is alternate camera angles. Your editing skills look good and you'd be able to make the montage more interesting if you add in some different angles.