Foundry sunday delight revamped

This map doesn't look amazing, no offence. I will download it but it has no chance compared to the smoothness and banked turnes on maps like back burner, also the corners looks too sharp to pull off smoothly for now 6/10. Its quite brave though making one on foundry with sandbox out. good try. and include more info, i know its a racetrack so you cannot say much but still. oh yeah and it looks stupidly easy to miss the point and camp seeing as its a circle with no grav lifts and doesnt fill the gap.
i'm sorry to make your first comment a negative one.

 

umm ive just tested this and you could fix this map but adjusting the checkpoint because you can camp in it right now but for the fun its ok i mean i do enjoy some of the jumps so 7/10 for fun asthticly pleasing 2/10 everything is ranther sloppy, and crativity 3/10 its all been done really so over all 12/30

 

hey you asked me to help you with this earlier and i had a look, i know i didnt have much time to help you change it majorly, but i forgot to show you how to make the destination uncheatable
if you want invite me to game next time im online and ill help you

 

Well I promised I would download the map and give you a review, and even though I'm a little late (had homework to do) I'll give you my review anyway. Here it is.

You Certainly improved the map in this version Blocking of some areas and making the final jump a lot easier, but once again, I've come across problems, Let me address them for you.

-Way too many goal points, There is around 6 goal points in one spot and 2 around the map. Only one is needed for a race map.
-The map looks quite sloppy especially with the box turn. It would be smoother and more aesthetically pleasing if they were flipped upside down.
-Areas of the map were to narrow in my opinion mainly the box turn and after the first jump.

As you can see this is a definite improvement, Only three problems I noticed while playing and forging through it, The map even with the problems can still turn out to be a fun casual game but if you fix those problems it can only get better.

I hope I've helped you with the review

 

pretty good map
also name=== thats what she said :O