Sandbox Short Circuit #1

Discussion in 'Halo 3 Race Maps' started by NEMESIS94, Apr 25, 2009.

  1. NEMESIS94

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    hey forge hubbers. this is gonna be my first post and one of my best maps. Leave feedback!





    Short Circuit #1


    This is my first racetrack and I just wanted to know if it was good or not. If its bad tell me what I could improve on.p.s i suck in forge Now on to the pics.


    [​IMG]just the main view.

    [​IMG]the part with holes in it.

    [​IMG]im not telling which way you should go.
    [​IMG]the curve
    [​IMG]jump over a kill ball

    [​IMG]almost there
    [​IMG]finish!



    when you playing this remember its not a full blown track yet just a test to see if i was good or not.
    to download click on the title at the top and while you at it download this too. Click Here
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  2. T REXasaurusMan

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    Nice First Post! I Love Racetracks, But The Fork In The Tunnels System, May Be Exciting And Fun The First Time But Not The Second Or Third Time Around. I Suggest That You Consider Making A V2 That Connects The Whole Racetrack So You Can Do It Again And Again, 3.5/5. Nice Job

    Oh And A Circuit Usually Means Something That Has A Track Thats Connected With Two Or More Laps.....
     
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  3. NEMESIS94

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    thx for the feed back!
     
  4. D4ni3l G

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    not too great, i dont think the begginning part with the wood bridges is a good idea for a race, more of an obstacle course really, and it is quite short. I do like the finishing line in the last picture however. quite nice.
     
  5. King 10011

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    Cool

    I actually quite like it. It many not have fancy curves and banks, but its different! Actually original unlike all the other sandbox racetracks ive seen lately. Good job! 4/5
     

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