Sandbox Reliance

Discussion in 'Halo 3 Competitive Maps' started by GIANT95, Apr 28, 2009.

  1. GIANT95

    GIANT95 Ancient
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    Map Title: Reliance

    Download Reliance


    Description:

    This map is meant for 4v4 Team Slayer or 4v4 Neutral Bomb.
    You start out at the bases obviously. There is a Hornet and Warthog at each base. There are two sniper towers in the two other corners. In the middle is the central tower that houses the shotgun and the bomb if you're playing Neutral Bomb. My friend Hooded Stalkers and I made this. He made the central tower and he placed the spawns and weapons. I made the bases, the sniper towers and the cover on the ground. Leave comments on what I should fix or if you like it. Thanks! This is my first post.

    Weapon List
    2x Spartan Lasers
    6x Battle Rifles
    4x Spikers
    4x Spike Grenades
    2x Sniper Rifles
    2x Assult Rifles
    1x Shotgun
    2x Needler
    2x Hornets
    2x Warthogs

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    Blue Base
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    Center Tower
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    Sniper Towers
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    ACTION SHOTS
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    Thanks!
     
  2. Chemical Wasp

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    no offense but the hornets were a bad idea the crypt is way to small for hornets to be effictive sorry and it would be nice to see a pic of the entire map not just the parts
     
  3. 2uix

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    hornets just really don't belong in competitive maps
     
  4. GIANT95

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    ok ill get rid of the hornets. Did u try it though?
     
    #4 GIANT95, Apr 28, 2009
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  5. CHUNKIEluver00

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    Is there a 'hog on both sides? cause it doesn't really look like it, and it should be symmetrical. Or just get rid of the hogs altogether.
     
  6. GIANT95

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    Yes theres hogs on both sides but the other people who left comments said i should take away the hornets. if i take away the hogs too then thats just stupid. which should i take away the hogs or the hornets?
     
  7. CHUNKIEluver00

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    Definitely hornets. Hornets in competitive are usually a bad idea, and hornets in the crypt are always a bad idea. Unless its a mini game or something.
     
  8. GIANT95

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  9. Benji

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    actually hornets are fine in competative as long as they are the transport kind
    however they don't usually make sense in the crypt but oh well
    btw great formatting on your first post to forge hub
    also some of your walls aren't perfect (see the left side of the tower in picture 3)
    but that really only matters from an aesthetic standpoint
    overall, fairily solid first map 3.5/5
     
  10. Laxer

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    Okay Man this map looks a little crazy. I'll try and help you improve on it.

    First of, there is a Testers Guild, which are a group of people who can help you test your map before you post it. They can give you criticism and help you fix the problems.

    I would definitely get rid of the hornets. Especially because the map is in the crypt. And also 2 lasers? Maybe a little much. And there also looks like a lot of "random" cover scattered around. Just looks a little rushed. For your next posts maybe add a little more pictures and maybe improve your description and weapons list by adding spawn times. Re-think this map and hopefully more quality maps will come from you in the future.
     
  11. iTz Longshot

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    pretty different looking map(in a good way) i cant believe all of those people just talked about the hornets, im sure you got hte picture, so ill spare you lol. well i think the wepon layout for the map is good for this kinda game play, maybe loer one spartan lazer liek LAXER said. i do liek teh sniper tower, it kidna reminds me of the mid-evil times at the top of a castel. and i also like the center tower, very nice design there. for the bases, they kinda seem like they were slopped together sadely, im sure that you can put some more detail into that and post a v2 for this map, it would be awsome. good job with the map though, like it said, it be nice for a v2
     
  12. GIANT95

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    ok ill try the testers guild this weekend or the next i dont have time right now. thanks. And longshot619, thanks, now im making a v2
     
    #12 GIANT95, Apr 29, 2009
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