Deadpool

his head's coming out of nowhere, although the flow is good, and the lighting is a little off. looks good otherwise, you also might wanna crop its width a little on each side

 

Cut off some of the top and reveal more of his body.

 

Great work, one thing I would change is just revealing a little more of the render, other than that it's a nice piece, you should try adding text.

 

Complete opposites.

Try it in B/W.

 

i think i agree with lock, other than that it has very good flow and i see no problem with the lighting

a lil unrelated but how did you get that "explosion-ish" effect?

 

Add me to MSN I can help you with effects and such, Icecikle might still be on a break, so PM/MSN me or w/e you can, vivid explanations can be given.

 

it looks like a floating head,
just sitting there...

And the render looks low quality,
or just badly render'd.
Colors are decent,
but for the first time;
i suggest you use the splatter technique,
i really would like to see what it looks like with it.

 

a man named iron e walkes into the bar

ROFLROFLROFLROFL FLOATIN HEAD SYNDROME ROFLROFLROFLROFLROFL

 

You need to show more of the shoulders or a bit less of the neck. Either one would be a quick fix.

 

No, just no. Read the posts.