This map is my first race map. It might not be as good as every one else's but its my first so please be nice (and leave feedback). The maps name is not creative because i couldn't think of anything else. This map has little asthetics but I was hoping someone else could help me on that (as in teaching me how over xbox live). Overview of the map (the mongoose is not on the big turn in the actual map). First ,and biggest, turn. Goal platform. Another turn. Final straightaway. If you would like to help me with asthetics over Xbox-live e-mail me at tjclark_2007@yahoo.com Please help me on asthetics and if you will bank turns and jumps. And maybe throw in a suggestion of a name. DOWNLOAD: http://www.bungie.net/Online/Halo3UserContentDetails.aspx?h3fileid=74343741
Not the best race map I've seen, but much better than my first (and only) try. This one actually works right! As you can tell from my failure to make a good race map, I won't be able to teach you anything, but you have potential. 5/7 (ha! take that traditional scoring system!)
Pretty good for a first. A few messy bits though, and I would get rid off the excess effects and killballs. For aesthetics it's as easy as throwing in a few columns or arches over the track.
Killball + juicy fx = pwn. It's a good first start for asthetics but as a tip sometimes what I do is merge some wall slits together so that the purple shines through small cracks and makes a cool effect. 3/5 I know you can do better next time.
Hey man great for your first racetrack =) everything is interlocked and not just layed there and it looks smooth... Keep getting better at forging and learn how to do banked turns and you're on your way =)
Thanks last chaos! I was expecting a 1/5 or a 2/5! Could you also help me with bank turns (I saw your map black heart and........ YOUR THE BEST AT BANK TURNS!)
lol thanks... I like to give constructive critisism... I'm not a complete duche bag lol... I guess I could show you how to do it... I've gone though alot of ways on how to do banks turns but I guess I could show you the best way i've found / how I did it in BlackHeart lol... send me a FR and tomorrow or later tonight i'll accept it and I could show you =)