Well I want to finally make this map that has been stuck in my head forever and it works on Sandbox. Well I did it, atleast until it wouldnt let me save to a certain point and i had to start over a bit. But anyways to the point, I am just looking for somebody to maybe take the time and check out my map and give me some good constructive critisicm of what I have. Tell me what I would need to do to make it look better. Also even show me a few tips would be really nice. All I am asking is for a little bit of time and some help, you dont have to build the map for me, just give me a few tips. BTW: sorry if this doesnt belong here.