Gasmask

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  1. Icecikle

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    I finally found some more nice stocks/renders, I though this came out nice, but idk, tell me what you think

    CnC please
     
    #1 Icecikle, Mar 21, 2009
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  2. Frag Man

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    Arrrgghh, if only you had added some in front of him.
     
  3. Icecikle

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    Define some please...or did you mean something?
     
  4. Dizfunky

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    IMO crop some off the top, down to just below the top of his head
     
  5. Knight Kninja

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    some of the splatters/brushes/etc to blend the render more with the BG.

    and also, with your text, try using two different fonts: a bolder one for the title of the sig eg. "gasmask" and then your name in a thinner, possibly italic font like mine
     
  6. nubsta

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    Nice effects. Not diggin' the compo, blending, or text though. Fix those up and it'll be alright.
     
  7. Icecikle

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    Any better? I did everything that you guys said, and nubsta could you elaborate please?
     
  8. AceOfSpades

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    I personally think that it looks really awesome. The stock you found looks awesome and all the spike things really go well with it. v2 is a lot better too.
     
  9. nubsta

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    Alright.

    Compo, I don't quite like how he's off to the left. Gives the right side too much empty space.
    Blending, you basically fixed already.
    Text doesn't fit in with the feel of the tag.
    Oh. And try blurring and sharpening some parts for some added depth.
     
  10. Knight Kninja

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    yeah it loooks much better
     
  11. Icecikle

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    Compo-where would you suggest him be? Dead center? He has to be somewhere, and center almost always looks weird, and him looking at the side of the sig looks weird too...I could flip it...

    Text-What would you suggest? Thats the best I could do...

    I may try the blurring and sharpening though...
     

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