UNSC Dock preview

Discussion in 'Halo and Forge Discussion' started by fabioisonfire, Mar 18, 2009.

  1. fabioisonfire

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    I just wanted to show you all something I've been working on; the UNSC Dock. It's an air vehicle dock based in Avalanche. I like what I have so far, although some things need some working. I'm going to show you some screenshots, and I want you to give me an honest opinion, and give me some suggestions on what to add and/or fix. I still need to finish the floor and add the ramp leading up to the second level. Remember: It isn't done.

    Overview.
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    Second overview.
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    Top view.
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    From inside. I don't like my floor.
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    Top side view.
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  2. Transhuman Plus

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  3. The Spartan III

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    is the dock the only thing on the map? by itself its nothing. but if you incorporate it into a map i think it could be pretty good.
     
  4. fabioisonfire

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    Believe me, I've considered it. I just don't want to go completely insane.


    It's going to be an 'assault the huge base' map, not unlike Castlelanche.
     
  5. The Spartan III

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    oh, then i think it could be good if used right.
     
  6. Guardion07

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    Is there Z flickering or fighting or howevor you call it. It seems that the boxes may have needed to be aligned a slightly slightly bit better.
     
  7. EpicFishFingers

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    It's good for what it is. Are you going to block off the other side of the map to make it symmetrical?
     
  8. patt06snipe

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    This is a really good idea, and so far the map seems well forged. Everything is smooth. I love this so far, but you need something to add to its genius and help gameplay. Maybe try putting a tower or something on each end of the curved blue crates. Also, you could have something similar to this on the same side of avalanche with little bases or cover here and there between both of them. Then just add in some vehicles, weapons, and spawns to where it is all balanced and you should have a really well made map.
     
  9. fabioisonfire

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    Yes, sir.

    Thanks for everything so far, guys.
     
  10. ZgreenZ

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    It looks like there is only one entrance, I would change that.
     

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