It's very good, but do you really have ADD? You've convinced me that people with ADD are more imaginative, but you should remember the PEE principle: Point Evidence Explain Basically you make a point, back it up with evidence, then give a basic explanation as to why it is relevant. Your essay lacks evidence. But other than that it is very good. The part about Thomas edison etc. is good, just provide more evidence and expand on it.
I'm not proving that they're more creative, per se. I'm discussing sort of why my ADD is beneficial to me.
never give out work on the internet. u are asking for someone to take this and steal it. because for all u know someone is needing to do the exact same/ similar essay. just a friendly warning man.