Retral

Discussion in 'Halo 3 Competitive Maps' started by Ppr 8 Kut, Mar 13, 2008.

  1. Ppr 8 Kut

    Ppr 8 Kut Ancient
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    Map Title: Retral
    "A quickly set up training area for troops stationed in Voi."

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    For use with most game types, although Slayer/Juggernaut is preferred.

    Description:
    This is my first fully finished map, and I put a lot of effort in to it. I posted here because I heard this place is better compared to the Files forum on Bungie.net. If you find any glitches / something wrong with it, just tell me.

    Screenshots:

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    Entrance
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    Base
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    Base 2
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    Sniper Perch
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    The Bunker
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    The Outpost
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  2. Epic Tusk

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    first off GREAT POST!!!!*gives a high five*
    I can tell you have not posted a map before on the FH so... I just wana tell you first that people prefer pic not in Forge. Second give a little more of a description as in tell what weapons are on the map and what not, you know? I hope you continue you work and get better as time go on.

    -Peace,
    Iron Tusk
     
  3. Blood Enigma

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    Im going to agree with nasty ol' Iron tusk, little more description of the map and weapons, pew pew! :squirrel_jaffa:
     
  4. Nemihara

    Nemihara Ancient
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    What gave it away?
    The fact that he only has one post?
    lol.
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    The map seems based more of of how you think it would look, rather than how well it would play.
     
  5. Draw the Line

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    Welcome to Forgehub! This site is indeed friendlier than the B-net forums and much more helpful as well. Your map has a few interesting concepts in it. I'll check it out and leave you some feedback once I've given it a forge-through.
     
  6. Matty

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    I think FH is seeing too many of these maps with a 'base' and a 'sniper perch'

    Try to think more creatively, and do some things that havnt been done before.
     
  7. Billy Reloaded

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    Although to me Forge Hub is seemingly slipping into the darkness that consumed B.net.
     
  8. Iv0rY Snak3

    Iv0rY Snak3 Ancient
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    some parts look a bit too open but everything inside the building looks solid good job
     
  9. Ppr 8 Kut

    Ppr 8 Kut Ancient
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    Yea mine's actually nothing too special... I'm gonna brain storm my next one.
     
  10. IxGUNxSLINGERxI

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    try to neaten it up with some interlocking and post the v2 i looks like i could have potential
     

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