Center Base (First Map)

Discussion in 'Halo 3 Casual Maps' started by ImpossibleRubix, Mar 2, 2009.

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What do you think?

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  1. ImpossibleRubix

    ImpossibleRubix Ancient
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    Center Base
    Symmetrical map that includes a lot of fast paced action.

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    My first map that I made to put up for download. Variant of Foundry (Obviously), It can have a lot of fast paced action. The map is well balanced and everything has its weakness. This map was made with Team Slayer and Slayer in mind. It can be used with Bomb, CTF, and King of the Hill. I made a Team slayer variant not that different from the regular version except for radar changes on leader. This is my first map please tell me how I can improve.

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  2. noklu

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    From what i can tell you've placed a sniper perch, a centre structure, grav lifts and a vehicle depot. The rest of the map is far too open so the sniper would rule and the sword would not do well. I can see some of the ideas behind the map, but i recommend putting in more bases, perhaps stairs up to the floating walls on the side, and spreading the vehicles around. It seems you know how to interlock and stuff, just plan out a better map.

    Also good first map post. Cheers :)

    EDIT: Actually i'm not sure whether you did actually interlock or geomerge any where, so heres a link to http://www.forgehub.com/forum/forging-101/
     
  3. The1ToFear

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    Ahhh.... first off, this map needs A LOT of work. It seems like you have just rushed it from start to finish, and didn't even care about the middle (Figure of speech).

    Please make a V2 of this map. No DL for me.
     
  4. philthyphillup

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    Disregard the other posts. This map is AWESOME!
    It looks great and even has a unique style to it.
    Other people just aren't brave enough to try something
    so bold. Good job and keep forging!
     
  5. ImpossibleRubix

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    This is my first map so, The1tofear, be quiet cause I'm not that experienced yet. You can criticize but not insult it. Try to be nicer cause you created a bad first impression with your post (the1tofear). Thanks philthyphillup =D.
     
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  6. The1ToFear

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    I didn't try to be mean, dude. I'm sorry if that is was your impression.
    I was just saying that it does need a bit of work.

    Head down to Forging 101 to see tips on how to make your maps better.

    Anyways, it is your first map, and keep forging!
     
  7. noklu

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    Don't you hate it when people say disregard other posts? Everyone is entitled to their opinion.

    What, no mention of me? But seriously cover is good. You need more
     
  8. philthyphillup

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    I unlike the people above have a featured map.
    It doesn't take amazing forging to have a great
    map, you just have to keep doing it even when
    others say stop.
     
  9. noklu

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    no one here is saying stop, and i agree persistence is a great quality but you can benefit from a plan.
    Also what do you mean by amazing forging not making a good map? The forging is what you do from start to finish-thats why its called Forge.
     

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