My montage intro

The filming could be better. Like, smoother.

And it's kind of long.

 

Agreed there. If you started the camera high and panned slowly with the right stick, you could get a better effect. Liek when Chad sings "I am so high, I can hear Heaven", you could start moving the camera to look downards, with your guy stood there. Then when it gets louder, change the camera angle.

Just an idea.

 

horrible camera movement, horrible text, and way too long.

I would start from scratch if I were you.