Sketch up - Karkaen

Discussion in 'Halo and Forge Discussion' started by TR1COR3, Feb 19, 2009.

  1. TR1COR3

    TR1COR3 Ancient
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    Just made a sketch up for a map i've began forging, and i need some feedback... What do you think works well? More cover? Less cover? Changes to the geometry? Structural changes? Be truthful, i don't take offense, just don't flame.

    I may also be looking for a partner, and will definitely be needing someone to help out with spawns, just PM me.

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  2. squidhands

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    It looks like you only have two levels: the floor and not the floor. I like that you're going for asymmetrical, but think of all the Bungie-made asym's. They all have more than two levels, even it they are just minor. It'll probably require you to reduce the size of the map, but it's something to consider. Vertical changes help just as much with lines of sight as horizontal ones.
     
  3. DimmestBread

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    same thing as squidhands said and also, one of the back corners looks a bit barren. Its back left if you are looking from the back tunnels or back right if looking at the tunnels.
     
  4. AceOfSpades

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    nice interlox... 5/5



    lol it looks good and like people above me said, add some more vertical stuff. also the bottom left corner on the last pic needs more structure type stuff. I like the layout alot. Depends on where teams spawn, you could make a sniper tower in said back corner.
     
  5. TR1COR3

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    Thanks, for the feedback guys, i might simplify and rebuild the back bases so that i have enough resources to make some extra structures/levels. I think i'll make another sketch up tonight showing the changes to see what you guys think.

    Edit: Im considering making the whole roof type area playable: Opinions?

    Edit2: Layout number 2: Not hugely changed but a few half height double box platforms have been added, also another 'sniper tower' has been added where suggested. BTW the question above still applies :).

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    #5 TR1COR3, Feb 19, 2009
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