The Punisher

Discussion in 'Halo 3 Aesthetic Maps' started by Dude2133, Feb 17, 2009.

  1. Dude2133

    Dude2133 Ancient
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    Hello forgehub, this is my first post so if i do something wrong please tell me


    This map is named the punisher, it is a ship that has been crashed in the iced ruins of a ring world , only lately have the covenant and humans recieved signals from the downed ship, both factions have sent troops to investigate the ship but they dont know each other is there.


    The Front of the ship

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    Warthog dropper inside the ship

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    Activating the switch

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    Staging Area

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    Human Camp

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    Covenant Base

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    Cockpit

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    Weapons hold

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    Thanks to Forgehub for giving me ideas and Plasma Rifle Elite for making a map with Warthog dropper which i learnt how to build off



    Download ---- http://www.bungie.net/Online/Halo3UserContentDetails.aspx?h3fileid=66503471

    Enjoy
     
  2. BlackYoshi911

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    Looks original. Can't wait to try it out for mlg or cap the flag man
     
  3. Star iz Legiit

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    hey it looks kind of messed up from the pics,try putting better pics on the post next time
     
  4. Hunter85792

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    Looks a little sloppy but on the whole a well made map. One little thing I found really annoying is that at the human base you have a ghost and at the covenant base you have a mongoose. Anyway apart from that it looks like a good map (and first post). Keep up the good forging!
     
  5. Plasma Rifle Elite

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    Cool! Seems a bit like a smaller version of my Polaris spaceship, it even has a base and a vehicle dropper! Good job, maybe you should interlock it more, though.
     
  6. Huntar

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    i love the warthog mayne!
    but i see a couple spots that need to be fixed.
    to help the aesthetics out,
    Make the two bridges cleaner together.
    And merge the barriers into the cockpit wall.
    But other than that it looks good.
    keep it up!

    3/5
     
  7. MichMaster32

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    i think this map is ok. i know its hard to maps of space ships on avalanche. i am not good at it. if i was to make one i think it would look like yours. but its still good
     
  8. Dude2133

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    thanks for all the comments i will try to improve on my next ship ps this one was my first made on avalanche so it needs more inprovements
     
  9. coolaid55

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    I'm really likin the warthog-dropper. Ship maps arent very original, but you seem to have originalized(is that a word?) this one. I actually had that idea awile ago, but i got lazy. Cant tell alot about the ship from the pics, but it looks pretty decent. I lik how different it looks from most ships. You could pobably work on the human and covie camps a little, not too interesting. Good overall, but ill have to DL to see, Ill get back to you with updated impressions
     
  10. sourdauer

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    looks like an average-to-good map but its really hard to tell from the angles of your screenshots. it would be nice if you had a side view shot of the ship.
     
  11. Wolverine

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    great for your first post. pics are working. but there isn't much interlocking (could just be the pics?) other than that a v2 in line is nice. 4.5/5
     
  12. Dude2133

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    there isnt much interlocking but my second map people didnt really like because of that so my third which will be here soon has tonnes of interlocking , i might make a v2 of this aswell
     
  13. stickmanmeyhem

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    Looks pretty nice. The concept is a little iffy, i mean, seriously, how many ship maps are on avalanche. anyway, its not the best i've seen, but its pretty good. Nice post by the way!
     
  14. Arguntomsback

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    This wasnt a half bad map it took me some time to figure out just how to activate the lift thing that holds the Warthog but when i did it was a very more enjoyable experience.
     
  15. Tyberiousfusion

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    Looks a little sloppy but on the whole a well made map. One little thing I found really annoying is that at the human base you have a ghost and at the covenant base you have a mongoose. Anyway apart from that it looks like a good map (and first post). Keep up the good forging!

    -Tyberious
     

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