--------------------------------------------------------- C4D? 2 C4Ds? CnC welcome. Just smudging, lots of effect layers...texture stocks... ORIGINAL
reconz pl0x... hiyaboosa 4 n00bzz they look pretty neat. Mabey you could have the armor different colors
Seems empty but I think you were going for that general look. But I think you should add some sort of I don't know what but it needs something. If I figure out what it needs I'll edit(I don't think a render is it)
There is way too much dead space, and the whole thing is plain boring. Definitely throw some text on the left side. I'm really not a fan of the effect you used, to be honest. I think the BG needs some C4Ds too. By the way the link to the original is not working.
true you got me there but idk. Maybe it's just me. Although even with the Thirds Rule look at the left side. I think you might want text like Warfang said but then again I don't feel like text is the right thing that it needs.
Ya I mean breaking the rules is usually a good thing when it comes to art so screw the rules. I mean think about it if everyone just made Art up to the same standards then Art would be boring but Art is not a boring thing.
I've taken your critique and there's some edits in the OP. EDIT: Going to bed. I'll look at your posts tomorrow. So go on, comment moar.
Okay the C4Ds are not super noticable really but I'm glad you edit the sandy colored one because the other two aren't as good.
This is great Diz, flow is great however there isn't much depth but I don't think it's possible with this. I'll tell you what sucks though; my stuff never gets comments around here hahaha.
lol mine niether Stoj. FH seems to be a community were those higher ups and there friends are the ones that get most attention since people want to be suck ups to them. I look at everything. I looked at yours.
little text on the left pls? its nice but the spartan is 'overblended' there's not much to make him stand out as a focal. But rlynicefx