ONI Stealth

Discussion in 'Halo 3 Aesthetic Maps' started by sleeper7642, Jan 25, 2009.

  1. sleeper7642

    sleeper7642 Ancient
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    This is my first Aesthetic map, so don't be too harsh. I made an ONI Stealth Bomber, with a working cannon. Here is the part that everyone wants, the pictures!

    Main View
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    Firing Cannon
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    Fun Fact: ONI Stealth was originally going to be called Column of Spring.

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  2. whiizzle

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    cool switch but it would look better if you put more work into the outside, or let someone use ur technique to make an epic ship with an actual cannon!
     
  3. sleeper7642

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    Well, I made it kind of skeletal and bare on purpose, because it is a stealth ship. However, I might use this ship as a template for a larger ship. (And anyone is free to use this ship to build on, as long as you give me credit.)
     
  4. Reidypeedy

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    make the ship look better byadding things to fill it out more, and put more pictures in there explaining how the switch works
     
  5. rewib65

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    i would say that this is a good template map, but as an actual ship, this is very bad. 1/5
     
  6. MultiLockOn

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    eewww, not to be harsh but....that was bad.Very 2 dimensional and not much interlocking to smoothen things out. 1/5. Sorry
     
  7. sleeper7642

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    Yeah, 1/5 seems appropriate. This really wasn't that good. This was more of a "tech demo" of sorts, to see if I could build a working cannon. I am using this to build a ship that is actually good.
    P.S. To all the people who commented, thanks for not posting garbage like "OMG THIZ IZ TEH W0RST MAP EVAR IT R SO FAIL!!!!!!!!!!1!."
     
  8. luckiesnipes

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    cool switch but you should point the cannon twords the map and make some structures to your like shooting at them.
     
  9. monko12105

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    Omg thiz iz teh w0rst map evar it r so fail!!!!!!!!!!1!
     
  10. iTz HLG nOob

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    dont take it too harsh but , u could put more work on the outside. 1/5[​IMG]
     
  11. Zanitor

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    Put a little more work on outside, I will give it a 2/5.
    Can't wait for v2
     
  12. sleeper7642

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    Hurm... What should the larger ship be called? ONI Stealth V2 doesn't seem to cut it. I'm open to suggestions.
     
  13. CyraxZ

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    Its not that bad, though you would want to add some bulk here and there (despite the fact that it is supposed to be a small ship).
     

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