Javiah Advice

Discussion in 'Halo and Forge Discussion' started by HaloIlove, Jan 19, 2009.

  1. HaloIlove

    HaloIlove Ancient
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    Okay, I made part of javiah, but could the community give me some advice for the map?
    Entrance to Hill and Rockets
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    Hidden Mongoose Spawn
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    Extra Bridge

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    Please note I'm definetly not done yet.
     
    #1 HaloIlove, Jan 19, 2009
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  2. RightSideTheory

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    I would go back and fix a few walls and smooth out the boxes. Some of the items are tilted, and the boxes arn't merged exactly were they should be.
     
  3. HaloIlove

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    thanks man.
     
  4. HaloIlove

    HaloIlove Ancient
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    some more advice? Like a list of +'s and -'s?
     
  5. HaloIlove

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    sorry for posting like crap, update!
     
  6. Trifslap

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    Seriously, don't triple post.
    I can't really give much feedback because the picture honestly doesn't reveal too much about the map, perhaps you should have posted this a bit later in the construction of your map or provide some sort of overview or a sketch or something of what you plan for the map to look like.
    I do advise you flip that bridge and interlock it into the two boxes as well as straightening up most of your interlocking.
     

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