Noise

Actually, that was fairly good. My favorite thing was the cinematography, very smooth. However, the story was alright, but there wasn't much to it. Then again, sometimes that is best, so I can't really criticize that aspect either. The only thing I can suggest is to put this in 16:9, because it would make your shots look even more professional. Also, you might want to be a little more precise with the song audio levels. I like how you made outside louder, and inside muffled, but the audio didn't change immediately, it would still be muffled for a second outside, before changing. In addition, when you fired the sniper shot, it would have been better if you did the cliche (I know, hate cliche's but it works for this) disk scratch. Something like this.

Other than that, good job.

 

I liked it, but it felt as if something was missing. The music is supposed to gradually increase over time as the scene nears the climax. Keep the muffled bit, but I feel the music should reach a creshendo of loud music right before the bullet takes the driver out. Maybe a more techno song? Those usually start out slow and soft and build up tension quite nicely. Umm, maybe some more character in the elite. Some grumbling and muttered words and a frantic yell in desperation at the driver would add more tension. The cinematography was exceptional. I loved how you moved the camera around slightly as if the bass was really booming. Very nice. Can we expect more shorts from you Odd?