Scyphozoan Signature

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  1. Krazy Kumquat

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    Well I just released my map Scyphozoan, and I decided to make a sig for it.
    Please view it in Forge Hub X, it looks best that way.

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    Tell me what you think, what I should improve, what I should change.
     
    #1 Krazy Kumquat, Jan 6, 2009
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  2. Pigglez

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    I like it, but there are some concerns.

    1. The random black lines next to the spartan. Erase them.

    2. Blend the arm (sticking out) better. It's hard with no BG, but just smudge it a little so it isn't so... there.

    And maybe add a good, normal, 2 px black border. But make it so it doesn't go into the outside part. That'd look nice I think...


    Overall though, 3.5/5. I like it besides those things. The text is great IMO, and it just goes nicely with the feel of the map. I get a good idea of it from just the sig. Nice job. XD
     
  3. Krazy Kumquat

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    Posted version two... Tell me what you think about it.
     
  4. CaMOfo

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    If you have a transparent background I think you should have the whole arm and body hang out instead of it cutting off. I don't like it, sorry.
     
  5. Krazy Kumquat

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    Well, because of size restrictions, I can't do that. I could if I made the guy really small and made the block part incredibly small too...
     
  6. Pigglez

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    I like the new version better. Having him out like that looks great, and blurred the arm well to go with the sig better.

    However, is it me, or is the spartan darker green than he was in the v1. Not a problem, but to me it looks that way. Again, not that it looks any worse. I still like it alot. XD
     
  7. Krazy Kumquat

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    Yeah he is darker, I just thought the other green was too loud for the rest of the sig.
     
  8. Toxic Spade

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    The sig doesn't look bad at all. The only thing that I'm kinda curious about is the arrows. Why did you put them in there?
     
  9. Krazy Kumquat

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    Something to fill the empty space, without 'em it looks too plain.
     
  10. RightSideTheory

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    See the arrow just behind the spartans right leg? For some reason that bothers me, it takes away from the natural flow of the popout sig for some reason.
     

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