Quick overview of the theme: The dark suited men are figments of your imagination (or is that just what they want you to think?) Stock: stock.xchng - people at work (stock photo by wagg66)
you need a better hand model lol plus the pen is in but otherwise quite cool and mysterious but moar stuff needs doing
Looking at the difference between the stock and this, I have to say you did a good job. My only slight problem with it is that the inner part of the hand itself (The part where she's holding the pen, in between thumb and forefinger) is a little dark. Other than that, I like it. Good job.
Yeah, the fingernails are way too long And I debated whether to find another stock of a pen and crop the tip in, but I decided that the person was done with the drawing and was just looking it over or something. Yeah, I tried to make the whole thing a little darker overall, just to give it some extra oomph.
I get you now. I personally really like the placement of the text, and think the font is perfect. I could easily see this on the front of a brochure or something like that.
Any chance of photoshopping the nails out? (shudder) Well done, I like how the men go in there. As was stated the pin tip is weird but its fine. I didn't even notice till pointed out. The lines above the people seems to be standing on top of the paper to me(?) Just looks weird.
I thought the same thing about the lines and I was going to fix it, but when I looked at it a little harder, I realized that, depending on how you look at them, they can look like they are on the paper very easily.
OMG those fingernails are discusting, as mentioned before, you need a better hand model lol But ya that is a very nice outcome. At first i thought the figures were there but no you had them put there. NIce job