Output v2.

This looks like a decent map, the layout is somewhat cool and you built some interesting structures. Still, there were several things that convinced me not to DL. You went from no interlocking to sloppy interlocking. Most of your merges are very sloppy, and it destroys your attempted aesthetics. That geomerged box in the corner looks really ugly... Also, it seems from your first picture that you have not nearly enough spawn points, the more the better! You shouldn't take pictures in forge mode either because it makes the map look uglier. Better than the original, but not a very well made map =(. Keep forgin...

 

The post seems a bit bare, you need to address
1.How it plays/How many players
2.Where each team spawns
3.What gametypes are playable
4.What the gate DOES and how it is operated

On a whole it is good to see you interlocked 8/10 objects but you should try to make them less sloppy.
To do this you simply need to line up the item that you are interlocking using walls or boxes flush on the surface of the object you are trying to interlock with and in turn making a guide line to lean the object you interlock with the first object.
This means that you will have perfectly straight lines when you interlock and the whole aesthetic grade of your map will be boosted phenomenally (long words )

 

I agree with Trifslap
This map looks a bit dull and boring
I would suggest making a v3 but actually spend time making sure each piece is nicely interlocked and smooth

 

I like the sound of a gate in a slayer map. Normally people only make switch in minigames and infection maps. But it seems open.

 

looks cool. a wee bit sloppy, but not too bad. i guess ur first try didnt go so well. But at i'm glad to see that someone takes people's advice and really add on to their maps and repost them. so +rep for u. the merging and interlocking is good. nice aesthetics and what not. 4/5 for the map. keep up the good work!

 

i see interlocking and geomerging which is good. i would only suggest one thing and that is lining up the items using guides to make things look staight because the iterlocking is very sloppy. Also the geomerging is even sloppier and for that i would suggest using guides. if you would clean those 2 things up this would be a better map and also this map is very bare i would suggest adding scenery.

 

looks ok but you dont need 4 fusion coils on the sniper tower the geomerging is sloppy and the back area looks like you dont want us to go there but we easily can and window pannel looks bad there

 

so many turrets, no
sniper in close range of 2 turrets, no
shitty geomerges, yess
bumpiness, sorta in some places
stolen bridge design from the mechanar, yes
epic fail, very near
even though this is v2, it has many more v's till it gets there
keep trying! youll get it right someday

 

I like it looks pretty neat but im not sure wat gate and switch u were talking about... interlocking was nice... the geo merging u need moar of... the time spent is large im sure weapons seem good... everything looks pretty good tho the layout could use a little work... 4.2/5

 

Sorry to revive this thread (I checked, I'm not breaking the rules)

I like the aesthetics, but from the turret pisture, it looks a bit basic and open. Good improvement on version 1, but a V3 might be needed. Good attempt to make a High Groundy type map.

 

Well.. Nice try.. but work on cleaning the interlocking and geomerging.. and spend a good amount of time on it. 3/5.

 

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