Sunset

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  1. Frag Man

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    Still working on my sigs. Hopefully this one is better.

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  2. Dr. Chombie

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    Eh, it's okay. It's too bland. It needs something extra.
     
  3. Actually cool

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    It needs a little KER-:punch: Other than that it's a decent start.
     
  4. Frag Man

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    The hard part is, what?
    I'm working on that. I can't seem to figure it out though.
     
  5. The Effected

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    I see only 5-6 layers...
    First is the orange bg
    next is yellow circle gradient (might be part of bg?)
    The camera flash/sunspot thing
    the sparkles
    the render
    and then the border.
    Fairly boring :x
    Add some stuff.
     
  6. Warfang

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    Separately, the BG and characters are good. Together, not so much. They just don't go together well. I like how you made the border look like a wide screen movie though.

    6/10
     
  7. Frag Man

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    I KNOW!!!! Gosh, and I have several copies of each layer. That's why she looks fuzzy on the edges.
    I had that idea from the beginning. I'll try and fix that problem later though.
     
  8. Stoj

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    The colours aren't the best together. Also, try blend her more.

    Most of all: Too much negative space.
     
  9. RaVNzCRoFT

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    Your biggest problem is lack of a theme. There's just nothing going on, and you've seen everything there is in the signature at the first instant you look at it.
     
  10. Draxfear

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    I think you need something like this to make it more interesting:
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  11. Frag Man

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    Is everything cities and space to you?

    Well thanks, but I was planning on adding something else. Right now, I just inserted text. I'm still working my butt on on the scenery I want.
     
  12. Draxfear

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  13. Frag Man

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    Updated. Added a background with clouds.
     

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