It's pretty good, although there's a discontinuity where the "d" and the "n" turn into lines. I also don't like how the first word is "ound." I understand you're trying to give the impression that the text extends to the left and right off of the canvas, but it seems odd to cut it off mid-word. It's fine to end with "and" on the right, but make it say "round" on the left. The whole thing is rather bland and it doesn't build on itself (you can look at it for one second and get the whole idea). But you have the general concept of an elegant design.