Iniquity

Discussion in 'Halo 3 Competitive Maps' started by sparten57, Dec 20, 2008.

  1. sparten57

    sparten57 Ancient
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    Hello this is my first map ever posted here Iniquity it was made for 4vs4-6vs6 it supports assault, capture the flag, king of the hill, territories, VIP, swat (if you want to play that it should work fine), and team slayer the players always spawn inside the fence of there base normally behind cover i don't think it would be very easy to camp someones base cause they are given enough cover to hide behind and a turret the warthog shouldn't be the dominant thing in this map cause there is plenty you can use to destroy it with there is absolutely no interlocking in this map just so ya all know but if there is something wrong with this map that needs improving then please just tell me any constructive criticism is always wanted. =D

    here's the download for the map just copy and paste it

    http://www.bungie.net/Online/Halo3UserContentDetails.aspx?h3fileid=60863977

    sorry about before there was a flaw in the map i fixed it now and i put the new links up

    Here is overview 1 of my map.
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    overview 2.
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    here's the center of the base the warthog can climb onto the lower part although its hard to do it cant get onto the top part though at the very top part of this structure is a shotty and around the corners at the end of the bottom half is a place to shoot people from and with the barriers like this you can still shoot over them but can duck behind them for cover.
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    here's one of the places to the side of the center if you go into the man cannon you will land on the center base normally on the top part of it over on the left side of the pic is the way up you can walk up there is no jumping required to get up just walking, in the middle part of the structure under the bridges are a battle rifle in each one the other side of the map is exactly the same
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    here's the back wall you can climb up it but the warthog cant as you can see there is a sniper very carefully put on that crane if you jump on it you will fall but you get a sniper as a reward it has no spare clips but on the top of this back wall is a bubble shield and 2 fire bomb nades but no cover at all and on the bottom under the over shield is a rocket launcher with no spare clips.
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    here is a place next to the side wall its the same on the other side there s wirespool in the upper left that has a trip mine on it and if someone is shooting out the window don't forget you can shoot the explosive barrels next to him believe it or not you can not camp at the shield door cause you can get very easily killed from the window or above or throwing nades oh and just so you know there is no roof on this place.
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    here's side A there's a turret in the top left of the picture and as you can see a warthog in the center.
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    here's side B behind the wall is a warthog and in the top right there is a turret notice that this is the only part of the map that is not a mirror to the other.
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    here's one of the tunnels the other one is exacly the same there are 2 smg's and a fire bomb nade.
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    here's the divider for the bases the wirespool can not be moved from here the little things sticking out at the bottom of the door ways prevent that from happening and there is a sniper on the top of it that has no spare clips.
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    here's the very bottom of the middle structure the other side is a mirror there is a frag a smg and a plasma rifle on the left of this picture and there is invisibility in the bottom middle there is a small place right next to the plasma rifle where you can shoot the area where the invisibility is at.
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    heres another angle of the middle structure and you can see the little shooting places that i talked of above.
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    here is were its blocked at but that didn't work so i updated my map and now it is blocked by dumpsters that you cant move so sorry about the flaw before i updated
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    and there is my map for ya if you missed the link at the top here's another

    http://www.bungie.net/Online/Halo3UserContentDetails.aspx?h3fileid=60863977
     
    #1 sparten57, Dec 20, 2008
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  2. Public Servent

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    Oh God fresh meat. I will pull a Great Swami and perdict that you will be hearing a lot of needs more pics, needs more interlocking, needs more geomerging, needs more more more, looks a little sloppy! Welcome to forge hub. Now for my opinion this looks quite playable, I like how you focused the action to the middle of the map. This doesn't look like a first map, I can see you put a lot of thought into fun factor. I'm going to clear out some old files and make room so this will be a map that I will check out. Good work on the post aswell I totally botched my first attempt! Any ways although you might get some critism hopefully its positive. Stick around there are so many cool and helpful people here it truely is the premiere site for dedicated forgers and Halo lovers. Hope to see more from you!
     
  3. sourdauer

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    hey, great job on the first post. i also failed at my first attempt at a posted map so congradulations! it looks like a really clean, well-put-together map. it may not have interlocking but many good maps dont use it, just look at Velvet by Jay. 4.5/5 from me, keep it up!
     
  4. Sgtkillstuff

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    Ok first interlock next time it looks a lot better and there won't be a bunch of bumps in the map. Second u have a lot of firebombs, and your weapons are mostly all power weapons. I would suggest adding a couple more structures all you really have is that one middle building.

    Edit: after playing I found if you throw a grenade behind the weapons you can get them to fly to you
     
  5. sparten57

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    Edit: after playing I found if you throw a grenade behind the weapons you can get them to fly to you

    thank you for telling me i tried that and they didn't move but i fixed it anyways the link will now lead you to the fixed on instead of that one
     
  6. spectraltravis

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    for the lack of interlocking and geomeging this map seems very playable and fun i actually think that you should make an infection version centered around the structure in the middle of the map so im gonna give you a 4/5
     
  7. Micr0Snip3

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    GREAT JOB! But i see u don't have interlocking or geomerging but every thing is clean and strait because you take u time and u are a great forger but if you made a V2 and added a tiny bit of cover it would snag even MORE downloads 5/5
    P.S. love that sniper part KEEP UP THE GREAT WORK
     
  8. sleeper7642

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    Great job for your first post! Looks like a cool map, and I'm downloading.
     
  9. minato

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    Looks like a great map. I see that you took your time to make everything nice and straight. Even if there isn't any merging or geomerging, this map could be really fun. I doubt that this is a first map, seeing as how it doesn't look like s**t. The only thing I can say is that there should be a tiny bit more cover and slight merging. For tuts on interloxing and geomerging etc. go HERE
     

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