Laceration

Try taking the direct link of your Photobucket pictures and putting it in between the code.

 

I tried to download the pics for you, but I think that photobucket might be having some problems cause I cant do this either.
Next time though, use the "direct link" url and click on the pic add thingy in your post editor and then insert that direct link instead of using the "HTML" option

EDIT:Sorry, I wrote this before I knew there was someone above me.



NO ONE ELSE POST ON HIS PICS

 

please don't post again, that would be considered a double post. Just continuously edit this current post until you get it right

 

unlike most people, I took the liberty of looking at all the img links. I'll say this map is bad but it could definitely use some work. I would say the main problem is how many "power" weapons and equipment there are. On the map, I've noticed:

1x Rocket Launcher
1x Sniper Rifle
1x Power Drain
1x Ghost
1x Active Camo and,
1x Mauler

Now, this isn't bad, but it seems your map leans in favour of one side, as it contains the sniper, power drain, and rocket launcher, as well as being equal distance from Active Camo. I would suggest changing this, as most people wouldn't want to play because of how it prefers one team.

Good Day,

~The Cheat~

 

use the "url" url in photo bucket wen posting pictures then they show up roght there in the thread

 

Hey mate, you have 12 hours to fix your pictures before I have to lock this. Sorry, it's the rules.

If you are unsure as to how you would go about adding pictures to your map, this thread should provide some help.
How to Embed Screenshots into your map thread.


Additionally, I had a quick look at the pictures and I liked what I saw. I'm yet to actually play it or even have a forgethrough but it looks to have a lot of potential.

It's actually spelled "Vertebraille" and it does not contain that many power weapons. It holds a shotgun(one in asymmetric and one in symmetrical) a needler(only in symmetrical) and Camo. Just thought I'd add that in.


All the Best, Linubidix

 

umm wow nice map i like the geomerging with the walls 5/5

 

The geomerging looks slightly tilted and you merging isn't exactly straight, but since your new at this I will let it slip, maybe a V2 so you can straighten those edges and the geomerging. You could also add some aesthetics because from the pictures the map seems lifeless and bland, a bit of scenery can do a map wonders.

Also there is some talent in this map, you can obviously make a map, and plan it very well, you should try a symmetrical map.

4/5 overall

 

The overall design and layout looks pretty cool, but there are some crooked geomerges and interlocks. Also, making people jump to use a lift , or get to any prime position, is generally not a good idea, because it disrupts the flow. I am referring to your fence wall above the gravity lift.

 

The map looks kind of open. You may want to add things like doors, walls, barriers or dumpsters on the floor. This would add more cover, and in my opinion it would make better gameplay. Besides that nice map. 3/5

 

good map I like the interlocking and ghost spawn but for the gravlift geomerge it instead of putting it under a fence. (dont know how PM me)

 

First off, When I read what you said about this map not being breakable (escapable) it really makes me want to try. I will dl just for that. I'll get back to you with the results.

Now for the map. It looks good but it could be better. Some of the setups and interlocks look a little bit sloppy. It looks as if you did it, noticed it wasn't perfect, then you either procrastinated and forgot or you just thought no one would notice or care. Really though, I don't care I'm just trying to help you. If you want your map to get featured then you must get everything perfect.