Cordena

Woot first. Anyway this looks like a very fine map, the interlox looks good although some structures look off and akwardly floating in the air. I will DL cause I like the smooth and refined look, although a few parts just stick out like splinters.
Gooj Gob 4/5

 

The map looks interesting. I like the flow of the layout. Besides a couple of asthetics here and there, it looks like it could be a really fun map. Also I like your use of ramping structures. After playing through a handful of forged maps I've always noticed one thing; ramps make for better gameplay then jumps, as in a fray, those jumps become very dangerous and are usually avoided or become deathpits. Anyways nice man, you got a dl here.

 

Wow really smooth how could game play be bad on something this smooth, There are a few bumps here or there but otherwise it seems like a really nice map, the layout is interesting and might take some time to get used to. 4/5 you got +1 dl

I like the v2 updates, the fact that you made the boxes not magically float in the sky is good , you added more cover which is good, and you fixed up some of the bumps , now I have to download v2 so i can look at it even more than i did v1.

 

great map!!! great interlocking and pleaseing to the eye and controller

 

During my testing I don't remember bumping once; it has to be said that the interlocking is very smooth. But as Pheonix said screenshots never do a map justice and from what I've played the gameplay is top-notch; I've never quite grasped what makes a good layout, but this is definately a good example. It's also nice to see a small map that doesn't take up the whole of Foundry every now and again.

However, as I very recently told Destroyer, and as Youtuber has already said, I did think some of the structures did look a little awkward floating in the air.

Still, excellent map.

 

From what I remember the passages under the boxes weren't used much, but I wouldn't block them off completely. Perhaps block most of the 'under center' passage off so that it looks more like a passage and less like a large gap underneath a box, without affecting gameplay.

It's up to you though.

 

Wow, this has to be one of the best small 1v1 2v2 maps ive ever seen. the hole map is infected with amazing interlocking and geomerging, i dont see anymistakes. I will dl and get back to you on the gameplay but by the pics, the interlocking is great. nice job

 

Wow this is a very very good map. i can tell you spent a lot of time on it. you got my download. Are there any more gametypes other than slayer, because i think oddball and king of the hill maybe could play nicley here. and why not even have juggernaut. I think you should reduce the equipment respawn time from 120 to 90, in my opinion.and also the boxes just kind floating there isnt good. i think you should cover it up. 5/5 well deserveed.

 

I like it, its got a ton of really nice forging. Its also very neatly done. Layout is great for game play. Though if i may suggest, you take out the mongoose, theirs always a guy in every party who rides the thing around accomplishing nothing

 

lol, ive never seen a mongoose on an mlg map! this looks like a really cool map, not only for mlg, but for regular play too. you have my download and a 5/5

also, you might want to re-interlock the lower corner wall with the doublebox, theyre interlocked so perfectly that they flickr in and out of each other.

 

First off nice map! Ok..

Pros:

1. Needz moar interlocks.. jks the interlocking is really good, looks pretty flawless to me
2. Aesthetically pleasing, special note to the B Base
3. Nice weapon placement, mauler is perfect for this map because is not a very overpowering weapon

Cons:

1. The awkward floating, which has already been addressed
2. Needler could be placed on the wall above where it spawns, just for aesthetics, and place two teleporter arrows also for aesthetics

Thats my submission overall good map!!!

i rate hmmm 4.6/4.8 well done nice map!!

 

This is a very good looking map. I like the houses a lot. You have nice interlocking especially the double box ramp, that was very well made. All the weapons seem to be balanced for it. I can't wait to try this out. Great job man.

 

Cordena

Summary;
What i can see looks pretty impressive, especially considering you've only used about half of foundry. I like the way you've presented it as well, it looks mostly very clean and precise.

Layout;
The map design looks quite unique, and i'd like to see how it plays with different gametypes, it seems somewhat different to most setups to what i see in cometetive maps

Bases;
The bases look good, the blue base in particular. The aethetics on this one looks very nice, but it seems maybe slightly bigger and better than the red one.

Aesthetics;
Some of the aesthetics could do with something a little more eye-pleasing, I mean, it doesn't look bad, but where the interlocking looks out of place, but that's not enough to ruin the map.

Weapons;
The weapons & equipment list shows to be like a regular MLG setup, but the layout is more competitive and could maybe use a little 'twist' such as a flamethrower, rocket launcher, or something.

Summary;
I'm going to rate a 5/5, simply because it's well laid out, well forged, the post is very good and shows off all the best parts, the screenshots show us everything, (almost) and basically it's a map worh 5/5.

Keep it up!