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hey, i suggest u interlock everything. like anything that can b interlocked. interlock it, but if u dont want to , say in the description...that u r lacking... that it was purposeful and also. take some pictures of the layout of the map, i cant really get a feel from ur pictures of what this map is like. also, take the pictures in a custom game so the spawn thingies are hidden, it makes it look much more shnazzy

i was looking more closely, and is there a way into the other room?

1 more thing: no armories, it shows laziness in weapon placement and it is not good for gameplay. i changed my mind. i would just take out the snipers. maybe just have one central sniper to grab as a power weapon

^^so on the brink of spam, this map does not need more pictures since it is tiny

 

wait so there isnt anyway into the other room then how do they get kills


also please bring in more pics cause i cant really see any of the map but if it is really as small as i think it is then no pics needed and if im right then 2/5 needs to be interlocked and have a way into each room


but if im wrong please upload a top view of the map so i can get a better idea

 

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It looks like a good idea, but you need to build more around it, you could add more pics, more aesthetic options, interlock more, and i definately reccommend editing the map's design layout, what you've got here isn't very impressive.

Good luck!

 

Not a lot I can say from the pics and the annotations. Just:
"Room"
"Room"
"Passage"
"Weapons"

Try to take an overview of the map with no roof if you can. This tells me nothing.

 

Its a good idea but u cant get any real game play
from it its just shoot, die pick up gun,
there needs to be more to it than just a room
sorry if i offended u this is me trying to do constructive critisism