Screenshot's Mongoose Spawn and starting point. First Ramp Ramp to top of map Smooth turn with shield door protection Sharp turn into steep ramp Steep ramp Overbanked turn Tumble cliff Stonehendge (For Decoration) Description For starters this map has only 4 mongooses on it because i did not use the infinite money glitch on it. for seconds you guys are probably wondering why i put a sculpture of stonehendge in this map. well the maps first official name was stonehendge and it was all laid out around that center sculpture but somehow Bungie somehow thinks that stonehendge is offensive so i had to change the name and make it devils mouth. Details Okay everybody starts off on top of a ledge where you comprehendingly drive off of it and then you make a slow and easy turn to the first ramp which gives you some very good air. then you make a sharp turn into the second ramp to the top of the map which has mancannons that help consiquintely you sometimes flip over and lose total speed =( but any ways you carry on and make a turn where you can gain your speed back by bouncing off of shield doors then you make a small incline into another sharp turn that leads you right into the best part of the track the steep ramp you get major air here and if you are using the gametype this is where you will get your lap point then you bounce off of some sheild doors and go over a small overbanked turn which leads you into the tumble cliff which from my point of view is very fun then after you pass that you make a small wide turn right back into the track again to experience more of the thrills ! Map Gametype
Nice race map. The stonehedge part was a nice touch. Also 4 mongooses may not be enough. Plus once you finish the race can you restart. I don't see a spot were you can. 4/5 though. Keep forging
this seems like a good racetrack. The only problem is that their is only 4 goosses but I feel your pain with the infinate money glitch. it happens a lot to me when i am building a race track and it is a real pain. the track seems pretty smooth and looks like it has some fun parts. i like how you dont have a border on all parts of the track to keep people from falling off. While hardcorre race track people will not like that, i do because it makes it seem sort of a roller coaster feel to it. It also adds another tactic to the game if you are racing on the map. you can now bump people off the track which is probably fun. another problem i see is that their is no starting line system that keeps people from cheating at the beggining of the level. While I know this is not a hardcore track but rather a track that you would play with your friesnds. While it is not nessecary, I think it helps the track. Overall, this is a good track and i will download and play it with ah couple of friends and see how it gos. Overall, 4.6/5.
I like the nice curves and smoothness of it. But like evilution101 said, the tracks are not closed off. I kind of dislike that because if you get shoved off it would be very hard to catch up at all, but you probably can't fix that now because of budget. Also the four mongooses will definitely put a huge damper on this since you can only play with three other people. You could try making this a two person vip track with vips having plasma pistols. Overall it looks very fun in such a small area though. Edit: Also P.S. its stonehenge, there is no "d". That might have been a problem with naming it.
Hey dude, This is a really fun track. And it is built well. The interlocking with the double walls and the fence wall bridge to the score point are really well done. I also really like how you have an aesthetic piece in the middle. I've never seen the tumble cliff done before, and my favorite part of the track is the man cannon up. Overall, this is a great track for small parties and I had fun on it. Good job yo, JSlayer7