Opus

I think its a pretty good map. Aesthetically its not the best, and it is a bit open, but it is a fresh idea. Good job, you can only get better! 3/5

 

This map has some good ideas in it. I understand you may have left it a bit open to compensate for the mongoose, but a little side cover wouldn't hurt (nice little something for your V2). I would also clean it up a bit for aesthetics; also, you should put another layer of walls to block off the back part, and straighten it up a bit.

This looks like it could be a pretty good map, even if it is somewhat basic. I will await your second version.

 

Im loving the main structure but the rest is plain and crappy maybe you should keep the structure and do another one parrelel to it

 

it looks alright. honestly, u shouldnt put a mongoose because theres not really a point for one on a 2v2 or FFA. its also open and i dont see much asthetics.
i hope in the v2 theres more cover, and its cleaner. the central structure is nice and the tunnels are cool.

 

Sweet design but Opus come on. To me that an immature name. I nearly didn't look at the map cause of it. But other than that 4/5 because of an awesome, original, design. But I suggest changing the name no doubt about it.

 

Without testing your map, I can see two problems. First, you have only one structure. Just having one structure decreases immensely to how your map plays. What you want to do with v2 is add some minor structures along the sides of your maps, so that there isn't just a bunch of empty space on the edges. It seems like you had a though about the open space with mongooses placed, but since you can't fire while shooting and there is only one place to go(the structure), they are kind of pointless. Along with making other structures maybe you can add a ghost or something, or leave the mongooses if the ghost would dominate too much.

Your second problem is that you placed all this:
Weapons:
Assault Rifle x1
Magnum x1
Plasma Pistol x1
BR x6
Sniper Rifle x1
Carbine x2
Spiker x2
SMG x2
Brute Shot x1
Rocket Launcher x1
Shotgun x1

Equipment:
Plasma Grenades x9
Frag Grenades x4
Spike Grenade x1
Bubble Shield x1
Power Drain x1
Trip Mine x1
Regenerator x1
Deployable Cover x1
so close together. It's just one big armory basically and armories detract immensely from gameplay because you don't have to work for the weapons at all.
Correct me if I'm wrong because I'm just going by the pics.
Keep trying and improving and I look forward to seeing your next map.

 

I'm actually working on an annotated bibliography for a paper I'm writing, so I don't think I can today, maybe another time. Did you get the part about adding some other structures though, cause I think if you add some surrounding structures it'll improve your map. Also for the next post, try either mapping the map out so we can see the overview, or just take a side on picture. I'll get a hold of you maybe tomorrow to test out the map with you. Let me know if that works.

 

looks ok but a little messy. i say to just clean it up alittle and u should be good. nice map u have some real potential and keep it up.

 

Looks to me like you just have a basic layout of a map, it doesnt look completely finsihed, there are parts where cover is needed a lot more.
Also flip the bridges over on v2
looks good

 

I bet i could break it unfortunately, pretty easy. might want to fix it.
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Looks very instresting, do you mind if i DL and edit and turn this into an infection map? it looks like it would be pretty fun with fat kid ;]

 

Uh, map looks decent though nothing on this maps jumps out and makes me say wow. Dont be afraid to add asthetics, OK? 3.5/5