panomoniam

Moved from Competitive to Casual.

 

I think you need more of a description if anyone is going to download. Maybe some of the traits of a gametype it can be played with. It also seems like the map is more weighted in the humans favor, based upon the pictures. I do however think that the teleporter "star" looks really good, and it also looks like the zombies can possible jump onto the humans from the teleporter? as i said, it needs more description to be judged.

 

Pausing from real self to super critising man

Alright, so you put a base full of weapons by a hardly protected zombie spawn (SPAWN KILLIN) and then turrents on top of that base, and then wrapped it all up in foundry and tied it with a bow? OMG

Alright so good post and all but exuse me for saying this but, this idea has been used so many times before. Quote by me 1 year ago {OMG, I just had the greatest idea, lets put turrents and rocket launchers on one side of foundry and let the zombies spawn on the other side}.

Sorry for so much criticism (I KNOW I SPELLED IT TWO DIFFERENT WAYS), but too get better thats what you must have.

2.11001010/5

EDIT
I agree with Die Hard Assassin that the star portal looks good, but that also has been done way too many times.

 

This map basically looks like two bases with no cover throughout the map with no interlocking.

I guess this is fine, but put more effort in your maps before posting 2/5

 

wow were to start,first off and this is the most important rule of infection maps NO ARMORYS! and also theres only one entrance in through the stargate (dont use those anymore they cause lag) and you a turret set in-front of it? not to mention 2 turrets sitting on top of the building and a unprotected zombie spawn? not to mention that i could camp behind the teleporter with my shotty and assassinate anyone who walks through? or better yet stand on top of it to block it permanently? you need more entrances and unless the zombies are super-fast-moon-jumping-1000-damage- resistance-gravity-hammer-wielding-super-zombies (ugh that was long) then let me tell you about this little game called fat kid, it was a good first attempt but you may want to do some looking around before posting a map an checking out some guides here

 

You might want to hire Linubidix to write your description for you...

Also, I believe it's spelled Pandemonium.

Welcome to FH

 

The map I guess is ok but it is way to original. Zombies attacking base, humans deffending. Also dont you think that map is a little to open to have 2 machine gun turrets over looking the zombie spawn. Either remove those or take them off so those are my reconmendations so make a V2 with some or possibly more of my suggestions and others.

 

The map looks really cool, but open. But more importantly, I'm sorry, but I am deleting this off my custom maps, because I am NEVER going to even bother wasting a map space to someone so lazy they can't even type with decent grammar. Unless you're a kindergartener, than I would still say that's pretty bad grammar.. 3/5.

 

I thought you were banned already... this is the second post where i have seen you spam with 2 words, and just say stuff that is negative. You have been warned already.. wow

 

It looks a bit sloppy, but it is your first map. I don't like the idea of zombies having to come in through one teleporter. This makes for camping and assassinations as zombies come through the teleporter (or people sitting on the teleporter, blocking it). And the map is also quite small. I think you should make a versionj two, with the back corridors blocked off, and a couple more bases. This should make it less wishy-washy and more fun.

 

Things needed....:

-better/longer description
-less spawn camped map!
-forging 101 section on this website (read through it)
-More pics of gameplay..... if no gameplay.... try testing your map.

You need to concentrate and put ever effort you have into maps you are posting.... if you are inexpierenced you can message me for tips.... k?

-Irish