UNSC HAIL OF EMBER The avalanche ship This map is a ship on avalanche called UNSC-D43-Hail Of Ember - it a second version to the ship UNSC Battlestorm, and is a continuation in the storyline in the initial post. This is the first time i have posted the map and it took me well over 5 hours to make. The ship is a battle cruiser and has a hangar along with 4 macheneguns, a scorpion main turret, a plasma launcher and a bomb - dropper. The ship itself is interlocked quite alot and is very neat. Backstory Once UNSC Battlestorm had departede the quiet, cold docking station on the frozen planet, it headed skywards to where it would be joining the great push that command believed would force the remaining covenant forces away from the orbit of earth. Once it had joined its forces on the frontline, the attack began. Quickly Battlestorm was overwhelmed by a tide of banshees and could do little to protect herself from the bulk of the attack, a great covenant cruiser called the Bane Of Sazalaar. the cruiser had little trouble destroying the rear stablisers of the weakened frigate, and as she spiralled out of control, Battlestorm entered the gravitaltional pull of earth - breaching the atmosphere and falling earthbound, breaking up into many large pieces. It was ironic perhaps, that a good ninety percent of the wreckage from the fallen ship should land near that docking station she had visited such a short time ago. Little did the captain of Battlestorm know, the people of the outpost were not only dockers but also builders of great and fearsome ships. The men of the outpost salvaged any useable materials from the smoulering wreakage strewn across miles of snowy wastland and with them, they vowed to build revenge...a revenge of a fallen titan....their revenge was UNSC "Hail Of Ember". It has been two years. It is time for her to launch. Spoiler DOWNLOAD UNSC HAIL OF EMBER
nice map looks veary basic (i like that because all the other ships are so complex) as for this map i think it could use a few teleportors here and there for looks (using the yellow ish things) you know. but other then the look i like it a lot! you got my download!
yeah, i try to keep it basic inside, i prefer to concentrate on the outside looks. dont forget to comment and check out UNSC Battlestorm
I saw the first picture and thought: "Just another spaceship on Avalanche" That seems to be true.....However, you added something that: A. I have never thought of before B. I have never seen before That whole Warthog claw thing is such an original idea I also like the design of the ship Well done: 5/5 and a DL from me
A real Frigate wouldn't look like this, because most ships for speed would be shaped more streamlined, like the Pillar of Autum. Other ships, like the Aegis Fate, however, don't follow this, because it still compact and the cool gap thing isn't much of a problem. This ship dosen't look very streamlined, so its not realistic. On the other hand, it is a pretty good ship. I love how you incorperated some vehicles into it. The Warthog claw is very unique. Some suggestions, would be to remove the top turrets and the boxes in which they were in, it just dosen't look that good with the giant flat front, and more streamlines back. And, if you can, possibly figure out a way to make opening doors for your Hornets. If you did that, you would deserve top marks. Overall: 3.5/5 - Keep up the good work.
this is a very good map to your predecessor. 5/5 Dled already. BTW how does the warthog claw work? And also... how did I spam on the other comment and who reported me?
This is an ok ship. I think it's a little small. I understand making ships are one of the hardest things to make in forge, but it's small. It looks great still. 4.2/5