My File share: http://www.bungie.net/stats/Halo3/FileShare.aspx?gamertag=WoolyDireWolf When I made this I didn't know how to interlock but here. It is a large building-like structure with 3 whole floors. Please check out and DL. 1st Floor 2nd Floor Top Floor
Did you make it so that it looks like it was destroyed or something because it does look like it was made in a sloppy manner.If it wasnt made to look like that try interlocking to help with the clean look of it. What gametypes do you suggest to go along with map? Also, a list of all the weapons and their placement would really help.
Well it does look a bit sloppy but it has a great concept. I'd just polish up on those forgeing skills and i'm sure your future maps would be great. Click forgeing 101 at the top of the page fo helpful tips.
If you wanted to, you could remake this with interlocking and other forging skills. I'm suggesting this because this concept definitely has potential. From the screenies it looks like it could be a cool map.