I was didn't have internet this weekend and I got on ms notepad and wrote up this story it's halo themed and took awhile of being bored and I thought It was kinda fun to write, enjoy: That was part one of this series please comment I have two more parts to post after this depending on how you like this Intro'.
You have some spelling errors even before the story started so i lost interest. I suggest you reword it and try again.