premisis

Your screenshots do not work.

You have to embed them on photobucket.com

First get your screenshot on your hi-res screenshot on bungie .com

Then enlarge the pic and click it again and hit save.

Now go to photobucket.Your screenshot should be in your cpu.

(first sign up) Then, you download it on photobucket and copy the img code.

Finally post it on your thread

And welcome to forge hub!

 

K your pictures are working now but you may want to add more to show different parts of the map.

Also you need to add a download link if you want us to be able to download it

 

The gameplay design looks nice, the central structure is going to attract many people to it, but you should use more interlocking and geomerging, as most of the forum says. I only saw one interlocking, under the central structure. You should show more of the map as well. All in all, I'd be up with enjoying a game on this map as long as all the walking areas and jumps are smooth.

 

only 1 picture?
hmmmph...oh well...
by that 1 picture it looks very open, and your map looks kinda sloppy and un-interlocked. Its also very open.

 

Now you tried.. and sorry thats what it looks like o most of us and me. Now it looks like a good solid foundry map with a new structure in the middle and bases surrounding it. Now no merging can sometimes be fine. In your case it is and it is not. Now forgive me for downsizing your map, but one picture does no give me the chance to comment on your map completely and truly! The one picture means you know how to embed pictures, but do not be lazy and post only one. So for the next map or the v2 you should try for a better post and a more concentrated-on map.

 

some stuff looks ok, but you should really merge stuff together.
3/5