lol dude, next time you film, do it on LAN, lol you need to lower your weapon, you looked like douchebags poking each other's hearts out with your br's in the beginning XD
I lol at this. It's been done very sloppily. Those guys walking down the alley were looking all depressed. Why weren't they looking forward instead of down? They should be looking with their chin in the air with pride. The music was so cliche as was the text. The trailer gave me no impression of what I would watch if I'd watch the actual episode. It's just a couple guys walking down an alley then they reload with an elite watching. It seems you were attempting to make something epic, but sir I must inform you that you did not.
that "we're" dude you're talking about obviously has to go.....you must do machinimas on lan, or else they suck...sorry to break your bubble..
well... im sorry to say the lines were pretty lame, like the "lets lock and load" and then you guys were walking SOOO slow i had to fastforward... sorry but i hope the episodes are better
We will, I already said that. They will be. With consructive critism, I will get better as time progresses.
i agre with linu about the music, like i told u earlier i have good music, i may be able to give u, but i dun know how. the rest was okay, the series i think will be better. remember bluejay a trailer is the thing that makes people want to watch the series, maybe make a better one, repost.