ODST sig

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  1. Actually cool

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    So, I tried to create a pretty lifelike scene in this sig, what do you think? Cnc please.
    Also, everything was renderd by myself, and the BG is from Devient art.
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    #1 Actually cool, Sep 16, 2008
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  2. drak

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    alli have to comment, is that they seem out of place, and also, they all have white outlines on them....2/5 seeing as it is one of your first sigs
     
  3. QKT

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    have you misspelt on purpose?
     
  4. Draxfear

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    Careful, last time I corrected someone's spelling I got warned!

    Anyway, it could be a good sig, but like sdrakulich said, the ODST's look a bit out of place, great placement though. You could change the colours of the guys to match the background, or blur the edges. Text needs some work, try differant fonts, and a colour that matches the sig, look for some text tuts if your stuck. Hope this helps.
     
  5. xYx ZeuS xYx

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    needs better text. kinda out of place. ad also, there arent white lines (at least not that i can see) but there is a white reflection or w/e from the sun from the picture you rendered it from.
     
  6. Actually cool

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    As far as font goes, I can't Dl fonts because i'm not the system administrator. Thanks for the Cnc everyone.

    I don't think I like V2 as much. I'm trying to make a good light source that doesn't cover the one guy's face, and I much prefer the sharpness of the first one.
     
  7. Lord Terrax XII

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    Well then just sharpen the render a couple times. Also I'm pretty sure you can just erase the lense flare.... =)
     
  8. EGP

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    It looks ok, the text doesnt blend with the sig that well. Overall 2/5
     
  9. JessicaJones

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    OMG HAX? Why are they at a beach. They are in they army, on the beach with guns...It looks good, but just wanted to ask why they are on the beach. But the sig okay =]
     
  10. Actually cool

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    Once again, I can't Dl fonts. Thanks everyone, I'm going to make a completly diffrent v3, i'm thinking I need a better BG.

    Oh and Jessica, it's just a setting, like Covenant, their just at the beach.
     
  11. xxAl Capwnagexx

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    The light sources for the ODSTS don't fit together, so you have to find some that match or find an alternative.
     
  12. Lord Terrax XII

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    Or just create a light source... Also pretty good for ur first. =)
     
  13. Actually cool

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    It's more like my tenth, I just got GIMP though, iv'e just made a shitload recently.
     

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