OMG EDITED AGAIN Dark Templar :: Unholy Knight

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  1. Hari

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    Ok i fixed it up a bit AGAIN. Tell me what you think AGAIN. Constructive criticism as always plz.

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    This was the original render:
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  2. HellsRequiemAMX

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    Its better for sure, just make the text more opaque, and you can just edit your previous thread instead of starting a new one, you might get infracted for spam.
     
  3. Hari

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    I thought the same thing about spam. My other thread was dead already though and editing it would still leave it beyond the sight of any pplz. Therefore making my changes to my sig useless. I'll also agree that the text lacks some opacity but its ok anyways.
     
  4. The Effected

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    Lol, I'm jk'in with ya. Try erasing the c4d on the render and on the scythe and it might look better.
     
  5. Legacy of Wars

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    i like the text but miss the border
     
  6. Dizfunky

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    Dude, you definitely are improving. Add some effects though, it's somewhat boring...

    Text is good though, and I'm glad you lost the border.
     
  7. Zerosun

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    looks good. Im glad you use nice and simple texts, i like that. 1 problem tho, i would suggest erasing the c4d overlaying the render.
     
  8. Hari

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    The transparency was intentional. It looks cool i think. Also, the C4D isn't overlaying the render. The render is actually several layers above the C4D. I used effects to cause it to look transparent. Also. a 1px border was requested and so it was granted. My picture resolution is so high that the border is now nearly invisible.
     
  9. Dizfunky

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    1px border = Ugliest ****ing **** on the planet. Lose it, pl0x.

    Erase the C4D over the render and it will look extremely a thousand times better.
     
  10. Hari

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    Edited again. Tell me what you thinkzorz.
     
  11. Lord Terrax XII

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    Okay so wat's different? Also no border.... Good sig overall though but the render is in the center and you should offset it a little.
     
  12. Dizfunky

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    Muuuuuchhh better.

    You can actually see what the render is now.
     
  13. Hari

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    Thx diz. Also, terrax, you didn't see the original but it was suggested that i remove the border. Idk what else to put in there and i think it actually is offset a little.
     
  14. NinjaKiwi621

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    i like it better but i think the left side could have something more. (looks a little plain) but other than that, it looks good.
     
  15. Hari

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    I couldn't think of really anything else to add that would look good and have good chemistry with the whole piece.
     

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