I like it but take out the pencil lines (white) and ur name... That just looks bad. The rest is fantastic though.
plz get rid of the white pencil and your name looks very good did you make the water....dip or was that there? also what does SOTW stand for?
kk. I was actually working on the blending so that the name and such would actually look like part of the lightning and it was more of a skeleton for guidelines in this pic, but I'll think about just taking it out. EDIT: SOTW stands for Signature of the Week.
Yeah, its about manipulation. Not text. Its an extremely good idea though. Just work on adding life to it thorough adjustment layers.
i agree with everyone above me that said get rid of the text it makes it look bad other than that it looks like its a good start for the pic ur tryin to do
looks good but you see where the lightning hits the water? that color of the water rising that you made doesnt look right. try fixing that up a bit and do what the others have said about the pencil lines. nice idea though.